Comment: Leja, that was really quite exciting! Some grammatical errors that were slight and did not detract from the pace of the story. Very well done! You could really expand on this one!
Response: Thanks, I tried proof reading it but they still get through. All my writing buddies were doing NaNO so not help for me..
Comment: wOW the most people i think went differently to you but I love your approch to this photo. I know I could not put it down till it was finished. Again wow you deserve a heart big time ty.